care to critique ;D? youll win my everlasting love?
ink sleeps from sleepy sky, as
sun returns to ocean
I saw him breath a weary sigh, when
he placed a kiss upon her bosom
my vision rendered, dark and dreary
I stumbled to
a lonely clearing
the trees had knife like fingers
they seemed to grasp my silhouette
I shivered with fear, and the sound
gave way to a rasping breath
I turned.
moonlight caressed her alabaster skin
ebony tresses drifted
waves down her back, and
she smiled, advancing ever closer
fangs like daggers
dripping ever softly
with lust.
Hi awesome poem, very captivating, and sensual, i like the voice and the scenery, you have a good imagination, the image is nice. I like how you take your readers directly to the point. Keep on sharing your gift with the World. God bless.
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