care to critique ;D? youll win my everlasting love?
ink sleeps from sleepy sky, as
sun returns to ocean
I saw him breath a weary sigh, when
he placed a kiss upon her bosom
my vision rendered, dark and dreary
I stumbled to
a lonely clearing
the trees had knife like fingers
they seemed to grasp my silhouette
I shivered with fear, and the sound
gave [...]